Wednesday, 13 September 2017

The boy and the poor alien

The Boy And The Poor Alien

Once there was a little boy who wore the clothes the colour of burning gold. His pitch black hair looked like a nest for an Andean condor. His cheeks always dimpled whenever he smiled. Every day he would count how many days left till Christmas.

Finally when the day arrived, he was the happiest creature in the whole galaxy. He woke up early and dashed downstairs. As he looked at the pile of presant his eyes opened as wide as jupiter. One by one he started opening his presents. When he finally opened his opened from his grandparents he found a telescope.

He tried to run to his room fast but the weight of the telescope made him walk like an old grandpa with a stick. When he reached his room he looked out at the extensive galaxy faraway in the space. As he was looking around suddenly he saw something shining on an undiscovered planet.

As he zoomed his focus closer he saw a little alien the colour of ruby red diamonds, with a head the size of a chair and enormous eyes that looked like eggs. The creature’s face showed that he was starving and wanted help. When the boy’s tears reached his foot he started to think of a way to help the poor alien.

Suddenly he came up with an idea, he went down to the basement where his parents made different kinds of inventions. The boy started making a spaceship in which he could go out to space and help the suffering alien. Days passed until he had finally finished making the spaceship.

He turned on his spaceship and went out to space. Launching the spaceship caused  his basements roof to break, but he didn’t care because he was still picturing the poor alien. When he got to outer space he saw a bunch of planets, a billion times the size of earth.

When he reached the undiscovered planet he saw the lonely, suffering alien. He went back inside his bag and got some meatballs out and gave them to the alien, he started eating them like a greedy pig. The more he ate the bigger his smile got.

On returning to earth the boy shared news of his discovery with the world’s greatest astronomers. They awarded him with $1,000,000 and named the planet after him. The  was so grateful for the help he decided to return to earth with him. The boy used his new riches to buy himself and the alien mansions in which they spent the rest of their days inventing and playing together.


  1. Nice work Rayan, your writing was really good but you needed to describe the alien a bit more but overall, nice work:)

  2. Great job! you added lots of good decription